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Lies and confusion
So much idoicy floating around
What started all this?
Some misinterupted rumors..?
It hurts that you don't believe,
That you tink I would deceive,
You and all my friends.
Yesterday everything was fine,
Or more than,
But today...
Today I'm the most wanted one
And you just want my head
When I offered you my heart.
Is this how you treat them,
All the ones you call 'friends'?
Look how deep you cut me!
Then just left me here bleeding...
But never once did I say a single mean thing
Rather I was silent,
LIke a martyr at his execution.
If this is how you want to be...
Well, then fine you win.
But please... I just want you to forgive me
For the junk I never did.
I'm sitting here shaking
With emotioinal pain that I can't fix.
I remembered and kept my promises.
Do you know why?
Can you guess why?
Because,
Despite everything,
I still do, and always will,
Love you.
So much idoicy floating around
What started all this?
Some misinterupted rumors..?
It hurts that you don't believe,
That you tink I would deceive,
You and all my friends.
Yesterday everything was fine,
Or more than,
But today...
Today I'm the most wanted one
And you just want my head
When I offered you my heart.
Is this how you treat them,
All the ones you call 'friends'?
Look how deep you cut me!
Then just left me here bleeding...
But never once did I say a single mean thing
Rather I was silent,
LIke a martyr at his execution.
If this is how you want to be...
Well, then fine you win.
But please... I just want you to forgive me
For the junk I never did.
I'm sitting here shaking
With emotioinal pain that I can't fix.
I remembered and kept my promises.
Do you know why?
Can you guess why?
Because,
Despite everything,
I still do, and always will,
Love you.
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So thanx to a certain friend of mine both for helping me come up with the title... although neither one of us knew there would be a poem with the name at the time, but also thanx to him for being so good during all of this, despite so much hate being aimed at him. 
You're a good person, don't let this get you down.
That said, this is not the best. I almost put it in scraps but can't decide if I like it or not. One second I read it and hate it and think it's crap and the next I like it enough to put up as a deviation... I think it depends what mood I'm in at the time. Let me know what you think should be this piece's fate.
You're a good person, don't let this get you down.That said, this is not the best. I almost put it in scraps but can't decide if I like it or not. One second I read it and hate it and think it's crap and the next I like it enough to put up as a deviation... I think it depends what mood I'm in at the time. Let me know what you think should be this piece's fate.
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Who exactly was this written in first person as?